chibi_trillian: (Zoro loves his swords)
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Title: Shiage-to
Series: One Piece.
One Piece: Not mine.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: Zoro/Usopp, spoilers through current (Ch. 440). There's such a thing as being too sharp. Crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] zosopp and [livejournal.com profile] onepieceyaoi.
Notes: Part the third and last of a series. Shiage-to is the finest grade of Japanese waterstone.


He was trembling now, choking on the heavy tang of Zoro and clove in the air, electricity crackling down his nerves like a mad god’s thunderbolt with that feather-light touch. He wanted to lean into that glowing energy, let it swallow him, let it immolate him in a blaze of white-hot glory so he’d come out the other side a different person, reforged and whole and new. And he wasn’t sure why.

That frightened him. Badly. Because he didn’t do stupid, careless things for no reason.

Stupid, careless things like getting trapped by a set of seastone cuffs he knew were there, for instance.

Bad luck. Destiny. Fate.

Zoro didn’t believe in any of them, nor did he believe in gods or blessings or anything but himself and his swords.

His swords. An elite group of which Usopp was now a member.

Zoro smiled, slow and predatory, teeth like a flash of moonlight across a katana’s edge on a dark night, and leaned in. The light grip the swordsman had on his chin became firmer, more controlling, tilting Usopp’s head up a precisely calculated amount before Zoro’s mouth was suddenly there, tongue sliding into his mouth as smoothly as a blade into a sheath.

Usopp’s brain shut down, quite possibly in self-defense, and his last coherent thoughts fled in terror from the explosion of cherry-red heat in his chest, like his heart was a crucible that had just poured the liquid steel of his soul into the mold of Zoro’s will.

He had things to worry about. Kaya. Merry. His father.

They all were such a long way away right now, in some sunny place where everything shone like Usopp couldn’t seem to right now. But Zoro was here, now, and his hands felt strong enough to rub away the tarnish of a thousand lies and the rust of a thousand tears.

Zoro’s mouth moved on his own, silent words that he somehow heard anyway, whispering to him of strength and balance. Of that moment when a sword is honed too fine and the blade will dull after a single cut, edge ruined, but oh what a marvelous strike it will be. Of his fear that when he confronted Mihawk, he would discover that he’d worked too hard, that he’d win but destroy that which made him strong in the process.

And if the strongest man Usopp knew could feel fear, maybe a coward could, in turn, be strong.

He trembled on the edge of hesitation, the Tower of Justice all over again.

But this time, as Zoro’s hands and will ran down his spine, he closed his eyes and gave in.

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Date: 2007-01-13 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mettathron.livejournal.com
... it's not fair that you can, with a PG-13 Rating, still make something that's fsking *HAWT*. Especially for a pairing I don't ship. *shakes fist*

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Date: 2007-01-13 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noodle6680.livejournal.com
But this time, as Zoro’s hands and will ran down his spine, he closed his eyes and gave in.

This line right here seems to make any Usopp pairing that much more ... *gushes*

And,I'd like to second everything [livejournal.com profile] mettathron said in her comment. :P

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Date: 2007-01-13 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange-smaug.livejournal.com
I was going to quote the entire fic because every line deserved it and everyone always says 'if I could quote the whole thing back at you I could' then doesn't, but then I thought you probably wouldn't appreciate me clogging up the comments like that so I didn't but know that I would have, especially for the last three lines and the paragraph before and the paragraph before that and ♥.

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Date: 2007-01-13 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
"But Zoro was here, now, and his hands felt strong enough to rub away the tarnish of a thousand lies and the rust of a thousand tears."

....♥ The way you drop in all these lovely descriptions, sticking firmly to your extended metaphor... Oh Usopp. He'll wield you in all kinds of ways and you'll come out... an amazing sword of the sea? ^^;

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Date: 2007-01-13 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maldoror-gw.livejournal.com
I'm lost in wonder at all the beautiful, original and oddly appropriate sword metaphors *happy sigh* Especially those last four paragraphs...poignant. I'm just going to be over here, making silly cooing noises for the next ten minutes.

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Date: 2007-01-14 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denimjo.livejournal.com
Chibi, I just thought I'd let you know that I'm (for non-disclosed reasons) pruning my Friends List, so I hope you won't feel offended or hurt in any way that I'm taking you off my list. Please don't think this is any reflection on you. :(

I will greatly miss your fics, though.

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Date: 2007-01-14 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wendytigges.livejournal.com
*is too happy to comment anything coherent*

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Date: 2007-01-15 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
It just concludes so beautifully. God, the last four paragraphs/lines just capture what's so freaking great about Zoro when it comes to being an example for Usopp. And Usopp-as-sword is so lovingly described in this bit and holy crap is it HOT! This little trio is SO getting saved.

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Date: 2007-01-27 08:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampire-otaku.livejournal.com
Mmm, what a sweet ending. Your way with words never ceases to amaze me, and this series was an awesome gift that I really appreciated. Thank you.

But Zoro was here, now, and his hands felt strong enough to rub away the tarnish of a thousand lies and the rust of a thousand tears. <- This line, for some reason, really stood out. So beautiful...

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